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Click hereA truly classical humorous piece
And like I've always said,
The true blonde's the truly smart one
And like you noted ~
Men will always be men.
in couplets, you put some work in here. A funny poem that just borders on the crass. I'd snub my nose, but remember that in his day, the bard bordered there too. I liked some of the rhyme pairs (max and pass was interesting) and didn't mind the one run four door... though simple rhyme, the length of the line did soften it some.
The reading was quite good, emphasizing the meter without leading down that tah dah, tah dah, tah dah road too badly. All in all a silly, but nicely constructed poem. And with a moral too... good work.
jim : )