Ægir's Wife Ch. 06

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And if he could not convince Bjorn, then he meant it...they would kidnap her. Again. He was sure that baby brother would be right behind. Hell, he would probably be waiting for them when they docked on the Holding. He laughed as he imagined the look of rage on his baby brother's handsome face.

He reached down for the final shingle. He winced as he felt another sharp pain shoot up his arm and into his shoulder. His head swam and he struggled to breath. He toppled from his perch and fell the two stories to the hard ground below.

Pain sliced through him. He fought it back though his head pounded and swam. He fought nausea but lost in the end as he rolled just enough to vomit into the grass next to him. He could no longer even tell where the pain originated. That elephant on his chest was back...and it had brought friends this time.

But his legs too hurt...though that word was much too weak to describe the agony that was his whole lower body. He tried to focus through the fuzzy fog that encompassed his brain. Finally, he was able to make out his leg...twisted at an odd angle. The bone protruded and blood was pooling on the ground beneath him.

He turned and wretched again into the grass as wave after wave of pain washed over him. This sea was rougher than the one they had faced that day. And as he did then, his only thought was...

"Kirsten, Æ ælske dæ," as the darkness took him.

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Auspat2121Auspat2121about 3 years ago

Wow this is Avery powerful story. So enjoying it. Love the strength and power of Kirsten and Ron.

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Great Chapter

To those in doubt...There have been a lot of contradictions that’s true but that’s what humans are a constant contradiction.

Sven was overjoyed when Kirsty used his name when they were alone having sex and then annoyed because she did it again in the 3some

Kirsty agreed with one brother (pretty sure it was Bjorn ?) to no safe words between them but then 2 of the brothers have used safe words with her, incl a rant by Bjorn to the old guy with Greta.

All 3 brothers were abusive at some point, ignoring SSC that’s not even counting the kidnapping and yet the younger 2 get hypocritical at Sven being the biggest arsehole of them all.

Sorry for repeating myself again, the story is compelling and well put together. I don’t think that using non English text is an issue, judging by context it’s really not difficult to work out that he’s saying to “Kirsten I love you”.

Pregnancy - someone commented on the confusion of how far along she is. To clarify the average gestation is 40 weeks, the plot said 18-19 weeks, it also said about half way (pretty sure it didn’t say 4- 4 1/2 mo). With multiple births (twins or more) the gestation is frequently 36+ weeks.

Compound fracture and chest pains - ouch, what an idiot.

Arsehole boy on the train living proof that some people should never reproduce even if he was only technically correct, manners and caring about others is a damned sight more important.

Tess (UK)

MsHesitentMsHesitentabout 8 years ago
Ps to add!

His obsession with strict protocol would also (I think) make sexual relationships easier on him if he was on the spectrum or had another personality disorder that affected personal relationships.

MsHesitentMsHesitentabout 8 years ago
I don't think Sven deserves this hate!

Yeah he's a backwards butthead and needs a good smack upside the head. It's not Kirsty saying he abused or raped her, it's the brothers. Her frustration is with his lack of communication. She wants the D. She was attracted to him first. He sealed the deal. Now he needs to pull his head out of his own backside and actually talk, some people are like that, I'm like that, prone to fits of rage when I'm feeling so insecure I might implode. Don't hold it against him, he just needs to work his shit out. It'll be worth it and that much more meaningful. It's when someone denies an issue or refuses to work on it that you need to worry, and we've got insight to his thought process. Kirsty is going on intuition. I'd also like to mention she WORKS with people who have difficulty communicating and Autism runs in families so you never know, Sven might be on the spectrum.

Reader1bcReader1bcabout 8 years ago
Wow

I can't believe how judgemental people are being. He's been an idiot yes but he totally loves her and has been acting out of fear of losing her. Plus she loves him! I hope to heaven he fully recovers from this and he doesn't turn her away again because of this in hopes of saving her future pain of his loss.

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