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He chuckled and reached behind him to the plate of cookies. He found one and held it out to her, "Welcome aboard, Kirsty. Care for a cookie? Mama and I made them."
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Anonymous5 months agoNot every woman wants to become a mother and give up her life with 3 husband's to look after, and 3 different outlooks on sex, an instant daughter, in a different country, in the country on a island with no hope of seeing her parents and friends again or having a career!! Look author love, have you been reading the Republican party manifesto if they get into power again? Look what they have done in 26 states!! When the Canadian government has advised people who are LBGTQ+ Not to holiday in America because there's been attacks in New York!! Or the Conservative party manifesto if they get in next year?!! Because if you are old or sick or disabled you are going to have another bad 5 years!!! Where policy doesn't respect human rights? For refugees from Afghanistan even after they worked for us?. From war torn countries? Where being gay means you die? And where my generation of women have had more rights than women 20's to 40's do....now. And are you writing a very small version of a handmaid's tale in this story??!!
VerniceLochartover 2 years agoIt's slow burn in a very pleasing way! I love that I get to see an in depth view of the thoughts and personality of the characters as the story progresses. Looking forward to the next chapters~
Anonymousabout 8 years agoThat last sentence would have had me shitting myself in increments. Uniquely brilliant story! Shot!
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Anonymousover 9 years agoThank you for sharing your creativity. I am enjoying your writing and looking forward to reading more. I think it will be brilliant. It is easy for the anonymous to leave sour comments. That is probably why they are anonymous. I just so hope you don't let them stop you from continuing!
