All Comments on 'Slippery When Wet'

At the risk of repeating myself, I'm impressed with how far you've progressed from those first rhyming poems to this much more seasoned poem. You've taken risks and experimented and done a grand job in the process. And, BTW, putting B&B in the Archival Review was an honor. It really deserves to be among the other fine poems that made the cut.

this poem was mentioned on the thread 'New Poem Reviews'

a fun journey to take- nice poem!