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by SinfulSexPot

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
Once again, it's those first two stanzas...

WOW....

"He moves her heart beats

He gives her reasons to breathe and smile

He is her whole World

He looked upon her innocence

And saw the gentle swell of flesh

She arched, he was enthralled"

you already earned your 5 stars....

Thanks for sharing, K

Vaughan1Vaughan1over 5 years ago
Firelight seduction.

The trace of the spine with one finger is an exquisite way to show a lady you are interested in her.

Your muse must have enchanted you!

Beautifully written.

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I have been a writer since the age of 5. I started with writing poetry to my mother and grandmother. I adored my father. Yes, as a child I was very much a daddy's girl. My love of stories and writing them definitely came from his influence. As far back as I can remember, it ...