All Comments on 'The Torture of the Electrons'

I felt every line, the passion, desire, burning lust, love enfolding, the frustration, the lament, the acceptance of the situation...but I also sensed the underlying attention to detail and time you have put into this piece too, which makes it all that more worthy.

I cannot pick out anything in particular that I can favour, as it would take me all day because it is overflowing with rich tasty bites.

Made me reach for a tissue.

This is an award winning write, in my teary eyes.

HoneyA ---5-ed !

Thank you for your kind words, and it should be clear that the opening lines of this poem were inspired by your excellent "It's All About Eve."

...mutual appreciation accepted. Please feel free to use any of my bits for inspiration...No pun intended 😉

Another 5 from me.

I am perhaps, somewhat biased as it brought back a time in m life3 that passed all too soon.