by Bray123
Great story, well-written, engaging and funny, albeit with a rather tenuous link to the April Fool's theme. Thanks for the entertainment.
Great writing loved your descriptive commentary like the mermaid thing. knew a girl like that back in the 60s when in the army, not personally though. She was the post commanders daughter. One of the guys in my unit had been screwing her and he was hiding from her when she came looking for him, I guess too much of good thing is too much sometimes. True story! good writing
funny to read. That Jo persona reminds of a Jane Bond character in a different story of yours where she was the protagonist. Someone made an impression
Great story, hope I never meet a Carol. But you gave me a great way to pass her on. Thank you. Great writing!