All Comments on 'A Mother's Sacrifice'

A few typos and editing issues, but that can be excused in a story this long. A really good piece with a lot of buildup. The eventual seduction felt a tad rushed, but I think you did well enough. Keep it up.

-LaRascasse

Five stars story indeed. I enjoyed all of it, from the build up tension to the feelings shown by the characters. And he sex was so hot too. I'm definitely looking forward to read a sequel. Thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the great work. ^__^

WOW!!!! What a story! I never had (conscious) feelings for my mother, but this made me cum so many times, I couldn't believe it! All the best stories (in my mind) are written from the Mother's point of view. Somehow it just tweeks up to eroticism that little extra! Five Stars aren't enough. Superb!

thank you!...i'd love to read more!

Loved every sentence, Thank you !

I feel that if this story were to continue in a sequel it would (for a lack of a better word) cheapen the love and intimacy of the original, so please leave this as a stand alone.

Just to say this is your first submission I've read your on my wish list to read more thanks keep it going

Very good story.; Would love to see a sequel.

That was amazing. The quality of your writing sets a new standard for bookmarked lit writers on my browser. Absolutely amazing. It would not have been as good if it had no build up. The emotion was ... just a great story all around. Thanks.

TY FOR A GREAT LOVE STORY with a happy ending to the first chapter lol

way to much I didn't want or need the why or how it happen in this much detail just a one please trim it down to manageable length without the bs

One of the best, honestly. In most stories like this, the mother is generally, for lack of a better word, a slut.

This was probably one of the best, if not the best Mother-Son I read. I liked it even more because of the hidden details, for example she was faithful to her husband, which is rare (On this site and in real life I imagine), she wasn't overcome with lust for her son or other men (Gave the situation a more beautiful theme, imo. It was about love) she was struggling with moving on from her husbands death, etc..

In most stories like this; the mother is a raging slut, the son is a raging man-whore who wants to fuck everything with his 10inch lead-pipe, the therapist is a sleazy slut getting off on the thoughts of mother-son etc.

This story felt.. Great. One of the truly rare ones on this site, imo. More erotic than just porn.

I hope you continue this story. It was well written and the story flowed very well. To Anonymous with the TMI, piss off. THis was a good story and what you fail to see is called character development. Get over it.

It's not ever easy being a Human Being, is it ? I hope the author tries to understand what I mean here because I think that this story has a very important message in it to everyone. In, any type of relationship, we human beings are very much responsible for the next person's well being, as this story points out. Society has a damning way of making that responsibility as difficult as accepting death. It's difficult to condone such actions between Mothers and Sons or even Father's and Daughters but yet, the BOND is the most important part between them as life itself. KUDOS AUTHOR !

hope you do the sequel ASAP

Bring his girlfriend back too. There's no reason he can't have both... at the same time.

GREAT story!.....yes add another chapter...so sexy...

Absolutely, please write another chapter; as this is only the beginning. Tommy is young, eager and a stud. His Mom is mature and experienced; so she can teach him. She loves, sucking and having sex ! Tommy loves to try anything.

Thank you :)

Oh yea you had better write another chapter would love to hear about where you want to take this,

Sequel please, but keep it just the two of them.

Loved it, a little long but held my interest.

It would make for a nice chapter if the ex-girlfriend came over and the forgot to lock the door, she comes in and seeing them puts her hands in her panties rubbing herself, they lock eyes and they ask her to join them.

You carry on from there.

What a fantastic way to relieve berievement. the build up was a little long but stil heald my interest. I certainly hope there are more chapters to come.

Very nice story would love to see where it does from here they still have to follow up with the shrink :)

I enjoyed it. The 180 degree turnabout from horror and disgust to unbridled passion was a little bit out there, but it was a good experiment. I look forward to another installment.

I think u should totally make a a sequel! Loved it! ;)

This story was amazing. I just have one thing to say though, was the part where she said she was going to seduce her son really necessary. I mean at that point she probably could have just bent herself over the kitchen table naked with her wet puss hanging out and just waited for him to mess her up. Other than that though great story really hope you write a sequel.

As I have been reading through the adndroid app only lately, I was not able to comment. Fired up my laptop just to do it.

Loved this story, hoping for an equally long sequel.

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Few stories have made me want to respond but this is one of those. You have illustrated the dilemma of both mother and son as they finally realised their mutual desires. I feel that this story stands well enough on its own and a sequel is unnecessary. Especially not one introducing others into this loving relationship.

Such a fantastic story! On of the few long stories that I couldn't pry my eyes away from. Can't wait for a sequel. Keep up he great work!

Very well written and easy to follow. This story flows and pulls the reader in, compelling him or her to read more. I enjoyed every sentence and every word, even the typos. A very skillful author at keeping the reader intersted. The final seduction worked very well. I think the story teller realized that she wasn't going to make his feelings go away and more disturbing for her was how strong her own feelings of lust and desire were. She truly wanted to make love to her son and you could tell from this story.

Please ad a second chapter to the story. Perhaps a conclusion to the affair and both him and her going back to their loved ones.

Do not cheapen this with a prolonged series with rushed sex scenes. Perhaps she could demonstrate her kinky nature and experience and she shows him how to really make love to someone as well as exploring that kinky side with ana sex.

Don't progress to allow this to get her pregnant. That perversion goes too far.

Keep up the excellent story writing.

you made a great story and I must say that you write incest stories better than any genre you have written so far the only thing that bugged me was the way the therapist was so judgemental with her negative words but it helped set the mood better and make it feel more taboo

That's all I can say.

"Epic"

Thanks for posting

She sees a longing in his eyes when he sees young fathers and sons and decides. She seduces Lisa and brings her back into play, two becomes three. Lisa swells and they all live together, sometimes happy sometimes jealous. Loving together.

I would love to read more about this sexy mom and her shy son. I would like to see Tommy become more forceful with his mother and take charge of her sexual needs.

Make her the submissive partner in their sexual love affair, and make her totally dependant on him for her life partner, even stronger than what she had with her husband.

A real sweet love story.

Thanks for the good read...

Enough said...with the.addition of Encore! Please write a sequel.

I would not begin to tell you how the story should build. But would love to read how you think the relationship developed as i think there is a lot more to this classic yet.

This might be the best story I've read all year. My only criticisim would be the minor grammatical errors (improper use of the words to and too; they're and their, etc.). Otherwise, I'd love to read a sequel. I would like to see Joanne treating Tommy to an evening of seduction; coming home to find her in sexy lingerie and her sexing him silly. Hope to see your next chapter soon and thank you.

Great read, i would like to see (like one of the comments above) more dominance from the son, that would be great, and maybe some public sex (a parking lot, movie theater, working place) between them.... anyways, well done, enjoyed reading it.

great story! I enjoyed the build up, keep on writing!

Excellent story, found this among the new stories; I will certainly be checking your other stories. My vote is definitely for a sequel, Mother even expressed curiosity about what kind of lover her son's girlfriend must have been if you consider adding that to your stories at some time. Thank you for sharing

...don't usually read this most popular category but appreciate believability where I find it. Don't listen to dig daddy who wants more in an about face.

I like the story, and the idea that she wasn't remotely into the idea when she found out. Very nice job on the story. I would be even happier if the story continued and he wants a baby with her. I'm positive you can blow my mind again. Thank you.

you have a great talent for writing and yes there should be a sequel maybe let the mother get pregnant and get some breast milk action going just a suggestion, anyway i hope to read more of your work.

Like others have said, great build up.

I gave your story 5 stars...But the part where the therapist suggests a surrogate didn't really sit well in my mind. I thought that she would instruct Joanne to find a man and by doing that, actually show Tommy that she is being satisfied in every department. Then Joanne could have indeed found another man, date, something but have the same intimacy issues she had with Jeff. Actually the part where she and Jeff break up could have been written in a way that he wasn't that much upset and that he could be willing to go one more round if Joanne wanted to, so she goes back to him, still has issues. Goes back home and lies to Tommy who sees right through her bullshit and confronts her about it and then we get to the same part where he kisses her and fondles her and the same plot goes from there. Though Joanne's willingness to actually go through with it should be more apparent and she has to realize that with Tommy she doesn't really have any intimacy issues. Anyways, sorry about my rant and poor English (it's not my native language), I like your stories! Keep up the good work!

Hard for many of these to be believable, but by accomplishing this, you made a very good story. Nice work. Hope you do more.

great story but i felt that maybe after going to therapy the son started to drift away from the mother making her realise that that wasn't what she wanted..... but hey, great story..... gave it 5stars.... maybe a sequel???.... anal maybe???....

please add another chapter

please add ch about pregnant and happy end

I don't usually read mother-son stories, but I liked where this was going.

I know there are many father-daughter incest on lit already, however I'm eager to read one with your writing style.

Awesome, I do appreciate that you continue to submit new stories regularly.

Your story had it all lovecraft, well almost. I would like to see her get pregnant, maybe forget that she's not on the pill. Please add another chapter or 5, thank you. Seriously good story.

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I love this story! I have the gift of having a vivid imagination and you have a gift of writing to take advantage of that. Thank you for writing a great story and I hope to read more about these two charaters.

I love the realism of your story. No true mother/son trangression would happen overnight and it makes the eventual consummation that much better. Thank You for your AMAZING work!

If love for a continuation.

What a story.... the best i have ever read... loved the turmoil in the mothers mind.. finally listening to her heart and body....ENCORE, ENCORE. MORE PLEASE!!!!!!

I really loved the way you wrote this story and it shows just how talented a writer you really are. I love the way you fleshed out the characters and defined them as individuals facing a set of unusual circumstances that they could not run from. You developed a plausible story line, and the sequencing of the journey into incest was well paced and quite believable. The turmaiol that the mother faced and eventually dealt with seemed very real and it leant credence to what eventually transpired between them. They were both flawed people, but they were also the only two people who could address and repair those flaws. Thanks for the read.

A LOT TO THINK ABOUT, GLAD IT ALL WORKED OUT.

I am new to this site and I think that was the best story I've read so far! Mother very conflicted but ultimately loving to her son.

Would definitely love a sequel! Thanks for the great read!

I truly enjoyed he story, I can appreciate the love between Mother and Son being more than lust; and think You struck just the right balance. I am looking forward to the next chapter

Another great story Keep them coming

This was a Great Story. I really liked the build up and the mothers change of heart. Great job! I would love to see more of their story.

All of your stories I have read so far are amazing. You are one of two authors that are my favorite. You write similar to the same way rgjohn writes. He is the other author I like the best. Maybe you and him could get togeather and write a story. There couldn't be a better story then that. Thanks

Yet another good story, a couple of typos though. But no matter, doesn't change the fact that you're one of the best authors on this site. Keep the great work coming!

But things worked out, I had faith in your writing but she took her own sweet time. Therapists are not always correct in their solutions, it is an art rather than a science. Please keep writing.

great story, just stretched out long enough, keep 'em coming.

I loved and hated how you prolonged the inevitable ending or begining, Good Job.

I liked the length of your story, my turn-offs are short one page stories that become quick fuck stories that most anyone can write. Thank You for this one.

Very good and believable (to me anyway). Oh, and very hot there at the end. Great work. Please, I'd like some more.

You knew it was going to get there eventually ... glad they did ... you might have had her more aware of her need to it to happen sooner ...

Human nature is a very strange thing. Everyone has it, and to everryone it is different--no two alike. That includes the death of a truly loved one, as no two people handle bereavement the same.

Mother was right to take some time to "replace" her husband, in her mind, body, soul and most of all her heart. Periods of mourning should, on average, be at least one year to as many as three; her mourning was about normal--long enough to "find" and accept her son as the benefactor of her getting past her deeply loved husband's death. Fortunately, her salvation was her son, who persisted in his finding his only true love, his mother, and her finally joining forces with her son to solve each other's issues--and the solution for both their problems was...(drumroll)...with each other as one loving, committed entity!!!

The story was written for effect in length, which was perfect. The printer or typesetter for the printing of the story has a problem "s" issue; often it should have printed and didn't. The context and theme of the story is an excellent choice, and the writing around the issues of theme were handled very well.

A sequel should explore additional issues mother and son need to overcome for their future life together--JUST THE TWO OF THEM!! That is what makes a families life together, as two parents, one or two children (let's hope they have two), and resolving their problems internally--without old girl or boy friends, and without or at least minimizing ghosts of their past. They could, or should, move to a new location (to help minimize the deceased husband's/father's ghost), exploring cruise, or beach, or camping vacations, sexy and erotic dinners (both sexually dressed, or undressed, but with decorum), and lots of searching for and finding the truly deep, deep love--lover's love--for each other.

Keep up the good work, great writing/authoring to be more precise. If the story is worthy of being an epic, written in the style of an epic, it deserves at least four pages, and many times six, seven or eight pages; don't worry about the number of pages though. As you have done, concentrate on the quality of your product. Your incest stories are great! Concentrate on incest production where I'm sure you will find your biggest audience!!

Mom was a very hard sell but she finally came across. Another chapter, please. Thank you for writing this one.

Great story I would love to see more chapters to this story.

another great one chapter story of a mother's love for her son ,with just the right

build up , could use a sequel , try to avoid rough sex or three-somes..

maybe find an illustrator to do some of your one chapter stories with good drawn

images..

best I have read in a long time....

keep up the good work

so hot story :) your all stories are amazing, keep this work up ! especially on incest stories :)

This was one of the best stories I've had the pleasure of reading. I really enjoyed it. Thank you.

That was really awesome and refreshing and original and beautiful and everything else that is nice, It feels really good to see authors put more than plain smut in their stories and it is downright exhilarating to see a plot be put together like you do. Seriously .... best author ever !!!!!!!!!

As for the sequel, need you ask ????? Who wouldn't like to see one ???? Just please dont turn it into a threesome or more even it is a girl you are adding as I really like the pure romantic aspect that you are able to put into a topic as taboo as incest. I could be wrong but I feel that love should just be between two love at a time. You can love more than one but doing them together (literally and figuratively) just downgrades the love aspect and turns it into a plain porno.

With these words, I shall take my leave and promise to check out your newest work whenever it becomes available.

... you badly need a proofreader/copyeditor. Did you even read it over again before submitting? I ask because some of the typos/grammatical errors/homonyms/homophones really jarred me, and should have been spotted before submission. Ah, well, I understand the urge to see a piece published. Been there, done that!

Art

It`s way too rotten to even try to read,, so many mistakes and garbage I had to quit reading. First learn to proof read, second find an editor

You`re stories could be awesome but with all the crap it just got to be too much

I think the story is great!!! Good story line and an incredible love scene!!!

Please keep the story going!!!!!

loved it

Loved every bit of it.

Another great story. Thank you again.

I truly enjoyed this story. The length, the depth and breath of this story was superb, everything flowed smoothly son misspelling but I do the same thing sometimes far worse. I couldn't see them as mom and son but as true loves that needed to clear their soul of trama and ease their hearts of pain. Great job.....thank you may I have another? If you ever care to respond do so at paulchris_pisces@yahoo.com

LC you are my most favoritest author. And I don't mean only on this site. your SWB series is easily one one of the best stories I've ever read, and I read a lot! I think you should give this story the SWB treatment. Just stick with the softer tone you've established here and keep the mother's POV.

Still, as I say, a great and (need I say?) HOT (!) story.

great story nice very erotric

That always seems wrong to me. Childish. Nobody really does that. Maybe it's a kink I'm not understanding. I like this genre well enough, but I don't like it when it gets all googly-woogly and infantile. Great story and I'm liking your writing, but that kind of thing throws me out of the story every time.

But then, the beauty and quality of this story is simply what I have come to expect from this author. Anything else would have been what would have suprised me. I'm thinking, though, that a sequal might not be the best thing here. Mother and Son were in a very good place when the story woound down. Life would get complicated from there on. Good Job - once again!

I almost always read part of very long stories and then go onto another story or writer, but I was so gripped by this one that I read it to the end. Lovecraft68 would not release me. I am headed to your page to see what else you have for me.

I love love love the conflicted feelings she felt as she sought a solution to her son's problem, and watching her take a logical path in trying to seek a successful resolution, before finally succumbing to the perfect answer. Ultimately, her giving nature based upon her love for her son, enabled herself to be set free as well, as she attained as much Bliss as he did in the end, through her commitment to allow him to take his pleasure in her body. Sexual healing. I can not get enough of this amazing story, PLEASE bless us with a sequel as we must see how their beautiful relationship evolves and it would be so thrilling to be a witness to their continued mutual passion! It's adventures such as these, that help people understand and hopefully accept that incest has it's place in this world, and can be every bit as wonderful and fulfilling as any other intimate loving relationship can be!! Thank you for all your work, you truly honor this aspect of our sexuality, in a most remarkable fashion :)

Much more realistic than some other plots, first i've read that involved outside help

This is about the best story I have seen on this site even better second time round , thanks

Big Al

Would like a to see a sequel if possible.

This story is one of the best I've read in ages. You need to write another chapter to this story. If I could give it more stars I would.. Amazing!

Very hot! I could really feel their emotion and the turmoil of the situation. Would love a 2nd chapter.

would love a sequel

i very much would like to see a sequel. maybe bring lisa and jeff back.maybe have the four be a very happy and loving family all together,you think?

It has it all! Emotion, lust, love everything rolled into one amaZing story!

I think you should consider writing A sequel to this story. It is one of my favourites going into my top 10.

So please please think about a sequel!

Where is the fire extinquisher ? This story has it all. The sex scenes were fantastic while not getting carried away. The expression of the emotions could leave a person caught up in the character's feelings causing them not only to empathize with them but to leave the person drained. This is a 5 star story.

A sequel would be great 5*