All Comments on 'A New Neighbor'

Looking forward to reading more!

This is great I really enjoyed the story. I think another chapter would do it good either to move it along to have more scenes. Or give the characters closure.

Love it,definitely more chapters

please give us more....

Very well done and yes to a couple more chapters

Another chapter? Or two? Or maybe three? Yes, please.

Very good. Continue the story.

Loved it , much more please.

But don't be cruel, be naugty.

Predmet, go with another part... please

We loved it my wife enjoys using me for her pleasure and i enjoy watching her with her girlfriends. Please write more of this we want Stephanie to be used by pattie and some of her neighbor ladies. Thank you mistress.

nice and very hot..thinks you can tell more from the two girls and how their lifes gone

thanks for these too

It was extremely well written and deserves a few more chapters. She likes being submissive and Id like to see her also fail a task or 2 based on the circumstances

Write a second part too..

Oh I hope you do!!!!!!!! I love these kind of stories!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Dam that was hot please give another chapter!

Keep going...don't stop now...please!

Very hot story. Don't know if the author planned to continue it, but in that case, Patti should pay a visit to Stephanie's office.

Oh that was so very good, I too hope desperately that you will come back and write the next chapter in Stephanie and Patty's adventure.

The writing is solid. While I’m glad you did not take forever to get the action rolling, I appreciate the time you spent building the scenario to make it believable.

My advice, pace yourself as you add to this. Don’t go for the gusto too fast and have her serving Patty and all her friends at an orgy by part 3.. Take it a step at a time, going a little further into submission with each new addition. Your pace dictates the buildup, which adds to the payoff if done well. And, I really liked that she was told to please her husband like that and I want to see more of it, using that aspect to bring out her submission a bit further with each act she’s told to perform.

You really have a promising start to a series with this. Please do continue.

Your stories are good; nice character construction, well written and credible.

I've sent you a PM today. VG.

Next chapter Please.

your story is a hit, and its real good reading too. well written, erotic and hot. more please

please continue the story, going to be a hit

. . . definitely!

Keep the story cumming......

It's bury not burry and jiz not jeez.

Keep it rolling it an awesome story so far

Thanks

Smoking hot great story

OH WOW!! So very hot!!

So very hot. I'm a mess from reading this

Loved it! Another chapter please!

No, lesbian domination is not my cup of tea, far as I'm concern you can end it here but others may not think so.

Love it.

I just finished the first chapter and thought I had to take the time for congratulations, even If I'm burning to read the next chapters.

I love as much the domination and humiliation as much as Stephanie, it seems. Also, great work with the editing. Keep up the good job.

Many thanks, PP

J'ai adoré.

Je viens de terminer le premier chapitre et je me suis dit que ça méritait des félicitations, même si je brûle d'envie de lire la suite.

J'ai autant aimé l'aspect domination que celui de l'humiliation, tout comme Stephanie, semble-t-il. Excellent travail avec la construction du texte et sa mise en page. Ne lâche pas la rampe.

Merci beaucoup, PP