All Comments on 'A Ride With Claire'

by old501levis

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GambierroninGambierroninalmost 4 years ago

The last line was amazing. I can't wait to read about the rest of the conference.

Shehasnicebutt2Shehasnicebutt2almost 4 years ago
well done!

That was a pleasure to read!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
I just can’t

Understand the selfishness of these two. Instead of talking their bedroom issues with their respective partners they choose the easy exit, everything they did is unjustified. I can’t condone adulterers.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Nice premise

But the sex (actual sex, not talking about it) happened much too soon. BJ right off the bat? Too soon. Better if there was some reluctance before it got hot and heavy. And some teasing.

lanncerlannceralmost 4 years ago
Nice ride

I like the flow

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
bow strings

bow strings are taut, you cannot teach them

litereader54litereader54almost 4 years ago

Wow - can't wait for more of the story!!!!!

LegallySaneLegallySanealmost 4 years ago
Great story......

and a great place to stop.......

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Awesome sexy story

Part 2 please

KansasFunKansasFunalmost 2 years ago

very hot and very sexy... wish i could take a trip with her! thanks!!

old501levisold501levisalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Thanks for the comment!!!

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Older married guy who likes the usual guy things... shooting, flying, a good story, good whiskey and women of all kinds. Writing, like sex, is best savored slowly, Rushed only at times after a long buildup that in itself is satisfying. Its both the journey, AND the destin...