by mellowgyrl
The story started out rather predictable, and indeed, the beginning and the end were just that. (And that's not necessarily a bad thing. There are many "fun" stories which use that vehicle with some very entertaining writing to make it interesting and amusing.) But the work in the middle, with the car, the airport security, the wheelchair, etc, etc; that was great stuff!!! I loved it!
-- KK in Texas
the fact that Joey turned out to be an ass wasn't surprising, it was fun to watch her comedy of trials in getting to him. I felt bad for her when it turned out he was cheating on her. Then it was nice when she remembered a guy that actually cared. You've come a long way MG, Keep working on it. - MJL