by mattmatthews
One of these stories where I wonder how much is biographical.
Extremely well written, thank you!
I don't use that word much but this was very, very good. I presume you write professionally. If not, what are you waiting for?
i thought i was just going to read a short,fluff piece of erotica.
but this was a wonderful short story!
please keep writing. i do have to say that the romantic in me wanted it to wirk out between the protagonist and Cindy!
enjoyable story.
Turns of life that were expected and surprising.
Well done.
I have no idea how realistic this story is since it goes well beyond anything I have ever remotely experienced or even could imagine. It doesn't matter because it was a spellbinding tale twisting through unexpected vistas coming up over the horizon or around the bend. And like majestic scenery, leaving you awestruck that someone could create it.
Paul in Oklahoma
I was going to write a comment.
But my comment 2 1/2 years ago said it so well
that there's no use to try again.
Again awed at the writer's skill.
Unhesitatingly ๐๐๐๐๐
Paul in Oklahoma
Loved it. Didnt quite go along with screwing the maid while in love with Cindy, but still a five
Enjoyed it very much especially the interaction between Martin and Cinthia. Very descriptive writing and excellent story. Thanks for taking me there. - Vriesea