All Comments on 'Agrabah'

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dreamer3366dreamer3366over 7 years ago
Tingling all over

Oh my, I feel flushed and bothered. That was such a delightful, erotic read. Thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago

If she is believing gossip, it is his failure to make her sure of him, no matter king and slave. Trusted servant was creepy and took liberties. She ought to be able to defend herself, especially since belonging to him makes her a target. I didn't feel the scene he set up for her proved his point, just the opposite. He may not have let them use her pussy, but he still let them use her in an intimate way. How does that prove she is his and he will keep her? All his councilors have come on her, yet he plans to make her his wife? :/

I can get into being the center of a group scene. This just missed the mark on the provided purpose. Please do keep writing.

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