All Comments on 'All I Want For Christmas is Mom'

It got a little dark in there for a few minutes, LC. Danny's dad's reaction upset me at first. Then I thought on it and envisioned what a real life reaction would be to a dad finding out his son wants his mother-so his wife-and I think you nailed it, just unexpected in our happy little fantasy world, but then I recalled who wrote this, lucky it was only a brief moment of darkness :).

But dad did apologize and I very much came away with her was a good guy and just not giving mom what she needed, but hey, that's what son's are for, right? Great job as always and keep them coming so uh...I can too.

Firstly, congratulations on the great news of your wife beating the big "C".Secondly, thank you for writing such a powerful story, I absolutely loved it. Personally, I thought the fathers reaction was spot on and made it even more believable. The pace of the story was excellent and although there were a few gramatical errors, these were easily overlooked due to flow and content of the storyline. Once again congratulations on what is, in my humble opion, a fantastic read

Wonderful that your wife is in remission!

I can really relate this one....I got caught too....by her. My stash of LLP books was getting harder to hide. Way to many of them!

Great story!

Great story:)

m/s category needs more long stories like this

But had some rough spots. Such as this from the first page,

Mom year was pissed last year and sounded even angrier this time around.

Awesome story indeed! So hot and nasty, hehe. Five stars and my favourite to win the contest. thanks a lot for your effort and keep up the amazing work.

Absolutely one of the best mom/son stories that I've read in this forum!

Not only were the sex scenes remarkably intense but the story line was one of the most plausible I've read in this genre. Good work.

great story,and a great read. loved it

This story has the air of realism that most look for in erotica the dad's reaction was the icing on the cake

your stories are what's keeping this side alive just wow

Dad's reaction was totally realistic. The stories where dad catches the son lusting after mom and invites him to come join them is the absurd reaction found all to often here. Don't get me wrong, this is an erotica site based on fun stuff so I take no issue with it, but it is refreshing to see a dose of real life tossed in, it made the scene with mom even hotter

And mom's initial reaction of being appalled and then blaming herself? The whole thing seemed so real and that, LC< is why you are the reigning author of mom/son stories here. The only author that could compete or at times surpass you was alwayswantedto and alas he is no longer with us,here and sadly possibly in real life.

But you've picked up the torch and made it burn even brighter.

This is super hot. More please. You can't leave us hanging, we need to read more!!!

Amazing, your story lines so believable and well thoughtout. So happy to hear your wife is doing well. We went through the same thing around the same time of year but 13 years ago. My wife is still cancer free and you are so right, enjoy the things and people that matter. Thanks for all the 5 star stories you share with us!

Really a twisted good tale that had me on the edge until the end! You have a great story telling ability and a twisted (good) imagination.

...one of the best sex scenes ever 5-star for that, but the buildup was tooooo looong, 6 pages until really into the best part of story...from one cancer survivor to another, congrats and hope you continue with good luck!

This story was too long. Show some respect for your readers and hold your stories to 3 or 4 pages please. 1*

the next it's to long (his wife's lover). I say write what you want and tell annony to eat shit and die. gave you a 5

Oh my, this was quite fantastic. I loved the plot and idea behind it. I was really disappointed when I started reading this story and found the mother and son already going at it. But then you twisted it into a dream, genius! I have to admit, because of that scenario, I totally thought this would end with him waking up with her knocking on the door wanting to talk to him about what had happened him having dreamt their wild night. Great story, some small mistakes with words missing but was easy to overlook. Congratulations on your wife's upcoming 1 year cancer free, I hope it remains in remission! Thank you for writing for us, and giving us of your time and mind.

Easily rates 5 stars!

There is far too much of it in these stories, some of you need psychiatric help.

i thought you did an outstanding job. it may have been to long for some readers but with all the twists and turns it was well worth the time to read. i will take time to read some of your other writings as long as they are not full of bad spelling and grammar and they have a good plot. one thing i hate is when mom and son take the father out of the picture to have a baby. sex does not make for a relationship and mother and son should never conceive a child nor act as though they are married. that is part of what i enjoyed about this story mother /son leave it at that

Pretty good start but was really long! I hope you continue writing, in fact, I hope the story continues real soon!

Really great, thanks. Disregard the complaints about the length. Slow buildups work best in this genre, incest stories where the characters dive right in without any hesitancy or reluctance are not believable.

best story I have read, no story is too long if the author knows how to write. Great job of keeping it exciting. part 2 coming soon I hope

Well written, had me wondering for a bit, which is not easy to do. 5/5. This is my first comment on here, ever, btw... And I've been enjoying Literotica for years. Bravo.

Outstanding!!

Best I've got from you in a while. Realistically done, for once!!

But y'know what I really want for Christmas.....the whereabouts of Alwayswantedto.

Now that would make a fine Xmassy gift!

.......just really well done.

All I want for Christmas is.....a new story by LC68. lol. Please ignore all the anons who complain about the length. They should stick with those quick one page two minute jerk off stories. A good story should last. A really good story by an outstanding author like LC68 should make you not want it to end. This story was an exceptional tale.

Normally with LC68 stories I get hard and stay that way throughout. This one got me hard but quickly lost it once the dad confronted him. Luckily I got it back when the mom visited him that night.

Another classic, LC. Thanks. It's good to hear everything's going good with your wife. As we all know, there's nothing more important than family.

Best

Story

EVER.

You have set a new standard in the modern mom/son genre. This work ranks right up there with the great G. H. Lawrence. That's the highest praise I can muster. Absolutely plausible story line, ebb and flow of emotion, and the reader is drawn into the emotions of the narrator. And of course the action is white-hot. Just superb. Wish I could give more than five stars.

Stunning...sensual...HOT...sublime...one of the very best stories of incredible mother son sex ever!!! Hope there is a naughty nasty sequel!!!

One of the best stories I've read in a long time. The conflict of the father, the sons guilt, mom throwing caution to the wind because she's a cum-slut...Keep this story going. New Years is right after Christmas, then there's Valentine's Day.

Please? We've been good!

One of the best stories ive read, please continue it

Absolutely the best mother/son story i have ever read. Fantastic story line.

One of the best written stories, I've ever read

Great job. The depth of characters and how they all fit together is well done. And the sex between mom and son starts out dirty but becomes a therapeutic bonding of love and love-making. Both care for one another and need one another and together the two become one in life, lust and love making.

You have created one of the greatest stories I have ever read on this site. I really hope that you continue this storyline.

That's an awesome awesome story I loved the whole story especially the end keep writing more please.

Good character development, wonderful anticipatory build up and fully fleshed out culmination. Does not get any better than this. There are only so many ways to get from point A to point B in this genre and your story diverges just enough to keep the reader engaged for the full 8 pages. Makes me wonder if there will be a continuation. I would like to see how you handle the after Christmas sit down with the principals as well as the development of the Fathers relationship with his mother.

This wasn't just simply a incest story, your story brought out the true feelings and love a mother had for her son especially after she found out how much he lusted and loved her. You need to follow this up with a sequel. I'd like to find out what his Dad really said and did when he came back not what his wife thought he might do.....

I'm at a lost for words... It all came together perfectly... I'm definetly saving this story.

Every positive comment given this story is well deserved. Loved it!

This writing is as addicting as any vice EVER. Hot as he'll and then some. I could probably read this storyline for a longtime at this temperature. Thanks for the length. My wife and I broke this into two readings with some intense fucking after each part. Encore!

One of best written stories on here. Would like to see a sequel. Thanks

Great story, a little heavy on the Porn imagery for me, but the overall love countered that sufficiently.

I would like to thank you for submitting your work here for so little a reward.

So please know stories like this and others really do make my day.

A sincere Thank you.

P.s. Thanks for the update about your wife's condition too. Touched by cancer as well, but not so joyous an outcome.

I wish you both the absolute best.

thinking about a comment ?

so my first thought was if you could make money off your stories you'd be a millionaire.

so why don't Literotica set it up to give to donations to a really good author like yourself ?

just like Fundraising.

thank you 5/5

I really enjoyed this story..but you know what I could not stop imaging that the mother looked exactly like India Summer....or Nikki Daniels.

very good story, wish u can continue part 2

Part 2 please !!!!!! Also I am super happy for you and your wife that she is cancer free

Man, this was awesome. I saved myself till the last.

This is legendary..

Keep these coming

I would have given you 5 stars for this great story, but you had a lot of typos and it detracts from the quality of the story. Proof read more or get someone else to do it to cut down on your errors and you'll be a 5 star writer for sure.

This is absolutely one of the best written most intensely erotic stories i have ever read.

happy that your wife is with you and completely cured

A fun story, as usual, from you. I fully agree family is first! It is great to hear your wife is doing well.

Hey Anonymous why do you care about the darn Typos when the story is great?

What are you a retired school teacher???

A great story but a ton of typos which without them would have gotten you 5 stars.

Another masterpiece!

I love the interaction between family members and the realistic portrayal of conflicting needs, desires, and emotions.

As to those who criticize about typographical errors, why do you read these stories? To catch errors or to be entertained by a wonderful author?

If you read to catch errors, please consider becoming a volunteer editor.

If you read for entertainment, why have you focused on the errors? There is an amazing story being told and your attention should be laser focused on the entertainment.

I believe this was the hottest story I have ever read, not just on this sight but any sight.

As much as I think more chapters could be just as hot, I believe this story stands on its own and the reader can imagine whatever they choose to from your ending. Fabulous story.

It was a great story. Nice build up. Good hot sex.

Best author on this entire site. Fantastic work as always.

too hot story. but it would be better if the mom only had sex with her son to help him get rid of his fantasy. But it won't treat him completely so they would have sex again and again. But anyway your stories are better than other writer's stories in Literotica. You set a standard here.

Loved the story mate. That truly is a gift that keeps on giving. I am glad your wife is home and cancer free and i pray she stays cancer free. Plz continue the great work.

Honestly one of the best ones I have read so far. Cheers

badmarine69

i realize it probably gets better later, but i couldnt get past the first few pages.

THIS STORY MURDERED MY BONER FOR WEEKS

fuck you lovecraft, if you want to write sexless tragedies dont post on literotica.

eat a bag of dicks you hut-sized turd..

Loved the story line; you're one of the best writers on this site! Keep them cumming!

Just Wow, a really good story from a fantastic writer! I´m looking forward to the next part!

I really enjoyed it. I really hope the story will continue as I think anal sex is something that needs to happen beetwen the mother and son. I think the enviroment is good to push the envelope into piss play also.

I've been reading your stuff for a while but this was the best

Can often be trased bak to pour editing or overconfidence in wanes writing. Maybe I shud have sumwahn edit my comments. Great story otherwise, but sometimes the distractions took center stage, and that was a shame. 4 stars, solid.

confusing!! I gave this a FIVE

Terrific story! Would love to see more chapters in this to see how they explore their sexual fantasies together!

You are by far one of my favorite authors. Very fucking hot!!

This tale starts out seeming plausible enough (for the genre) and takes you on a wild ride to a fantastic, lust-soaked climax. And a mouth-watering denouement. What a setup for more installments from an excellent writer!

A mental pervert's delight. Now I have to go take a cold shower.

Not a usual superlative but a very apt one.

This piece gripped me from the beginning and then it just kept getting better. The premise is solid, the characters display depth and emotion. Snappy opening and beautiful pacing and development to a satisfying conclusion. A conclusion that didn't end with the actual act but in the aftermath of it, still displaying the emotional depth with the love between them still present.

The actual erotica is there and very well written. This is a masterpiece. I have yet to reread it and I most definitely will be. I vote on the story, not on the editing but having read the comments first before entering mine I'll state now, I gave it a five. If they're there, I didn't notice them which is enough for me, I was getting the story.

Thank you very much and I wish you and your wife both many happy years together.

This is quite simply one of the best stories I've read in this genre. Every human emotion was on display. Stunningly well crafted.

All your stories are great but this one is my new favourite!

Great,beautiful story. Please write more,just like this one.

I love happy endings with mom and son.

One more thing-Best wishes to your wife and you.

Very well written, and great storyline and plot. maybe a little too much backdrop, but overall, definitely a 5 out of 5 from me.

Please write more stories like this.

Please write second chapter of this story.

Please, just write more :)

p.s.

I'm really glad about your wife.

...I hate mom/son stories with dads. Dads ruin everything.

perhaps for different reasons. Why did I give this tale one star? Because (once again) you elected to insert a male parent for the (seemingly) sole purpose of cuckolding him. Maybe adultery (incestuous or otherwise) turns you on; so be it. I don't have to like it, and my vote reflects the fact that that element, all on its own, makes the story repulsive to me. (And yes I recognize the strangeness of having a problem with fictional adultery, but not fictional incest. I never said I wasn't odd.) Sorry if I've offended you, I really do enjoy a lot of your work, but you asked for comments, and this is mine, irritating though it may be.

On a different tack, I'm glad to hear your wife is doing better! (I don't want to say "doing well" just in case she's still enduring the unpleasant aftereffects of treatment) May she grow stronger with each passing day! :)

-Anubelore

She says "he doesn't lust for me"...on the very first page he's (the poor bastard of a father/husband) shown lusting after her. Apparently being too tired (from working your ass off to care for your family) to be sexually adventurous means 1: you deserve to be cheated on (oh boy a lot of working wives will be shocked to learn that one) and 2: you obviously don't "lust" after your spouse. Damn, that's a deeply disturbing worldview...

-Anubelore

You're correct I do ask for feedback and appreciate the time you took to respond. Although your comment shows you did not like this story, in my eyes it still succeeded because it sparked something in you to compel you to comment.

Different strokes for different folks and this story obviously hit a squick rather than sweet spot for you, not everything appeals to everyone. Thank you again for taking time to express your opinion and the compliment on my other stories. Hope to see you commenting in the future.

This was one of the hottest fucking stories I've read on this site. The build up was incredible, and I came harder than I thought I could. Thank you for writing this, I am absolutely checking out your other stuff on here. I really wish you'd write a second chapter of this, but even leaving it where it is makes for a fantastic story.

A bit to long if you ask me.

what a hot and thoughtful story you have written. First of all son is lusting for his beautiful hot and sexy mom. But mom is good character lady who is faithful to her husband but at the same time less satisfied in terms of sex.

Dad finds sons obsession towards his mom and he becomes mad person in anger. He can't hold his anger when he knows that his son wants to fuck his beautiful wife.

Mom also knows the situation and tension builds.

But at last mom searches way to break this tension and submits herself to lustful hands of her own son willingly.

Then starts actual game of love....sex between mom and son. Mind and body satisfying sex between mom and son.

Great story Lovecraft. Hats off to you.

Super lust, well detailed, most readers should get really hot, sexy Moms will love it,

and get their fantasies stoked up...whew!

Not bad but not enough build up to it

Although, perhaps more interesting is the question of if the father effectively taught him that sex should include feelings (i.e. no booty calls of one night stands), why he didn't also teach him sex should be vanilla...?

True, it would have made for a different story... But I'm guessing it's just that the father was SO against non-vanilla he couldn't even DISCUSS non-vanilla... surprised she managed to get him to do what was in the pictures even drunk...

Good story though, no doubt...

But I really enjoyed the fact that you chose to have the huge fight scene when the son got outed, made it more 'real' I guess. Overall enjoyable.

I loved it ! Only thing would have made it better would be Mom showing her son her pussy and where to touch her, maybe let him stretch her lips & also pull her clit hood up to show off her clit.

This was one of your best. The drama brought a lot of emotion to the story. I was concerned about the ending but it turned out perfect. Thank you so much. Merry Christmas

I thoroughly enjoyed this story. Would love to read more adventures. Got very hard, had to cum twice.

and very well written too!

The stories that are better are the ones that sound plausible.

victorious

I dont come across too many stories where the father finds out about the son's desire for his mom, but when i do the confrontation doesnt last very long. This was the first i've read where the fighting seemed so real and believable that it really had me hooked on what would happen next. I was really worried for him and what his dad would do to him. Thankfully mom is always there to make it better. Hopefully you can continue this story to have them fool around while dad is living in his own little world...

Excellently written. Like a novel with a plot about a mother and son's relationship.

I gave you a four. You deserve a 5 but I have this thing about really big breasts being a big part of the story. Hell, that's just me.

Congratulations on your writing capabilities. Very talented.

that would brighten up any ones holiday get you off like a fire cracker keep on trucking tenbears43

I had never considered such embarrassing implications. A father finds out his son wants his mother sexually. A no way out situation that turns good. It was very hot when Danny and his mom got down to business enjoying each others bodies so thoroughly!

This was amazing story . I loved every minute of it hope to see more of yr work in the future

Great story so much to build on.

Please keep this story going, it is one of the best I ever read. There needs to be more.