All Comments on 'And The Night Stood Still'

Hope this will not be the last we hear of John and Mo.

Very nicely done. I really enjoyed this story. Keep writing!

I am a 68 year old man and I want to thank you for having people my age in your story. Not all of us have lost our lust for life and all it's pleasures. I, for one, would like to see how this progresses. Thank you, again.

Mostly believable that John and Mo could have experienced what you wrote, yet I wondered if his Viagra would have kicked in that quickly and wondered, too, if Mo's vagina would have lubricated that much. Like the other commenters, tell us more about that Wednesday meeting, please.

I'm sure that all us senior citizens had great fun with this one. It was funny, yet very true. I just loved that line: "I started to get what passes for an erection these days". Unfortunately many of us can identify with that comment. Their banter was really funny. 5* for sure.

I really enjoyed this realistic tale. Other comments have already covered my feelings about 2 seniors finding that everything is still working. Well done.. How old are you?

Is this imagination or a reflection of an experience?

Thanks to all for the comments (and votes, too). My stories are all complete works of fiction, although each has a muse from real life. It can be someone I know, have met or even just see, but who inspires my overactive imagination. I started writing to pass time on the lonely evenings since my wife of almost 40 years died. I attempt to write stories that aren't just porn, but rather have characters who are attracted to each other. And as my stories indicate, I'm a 70 year old inveterate wiseass, music geek and dog lover.

I just found this story and I REALLY liked it. I could truly see how this could happen. I enjoyed the development of the characters and the dialog....and of course the sex! Thanks for a good read!