by TrampsAnThieves
OK! Well, not OK but great. I'm assuming this is a first part. You have certainly go a lot of avenues to explore with other parts. Just don't drag it out too long.
I like this story. I *love* that this isn't cheating. It's taboo, but everyone (except Reina yet, but she's not *with* him yet) knows what's going on and is okay with it. It's all caring and loving, and he's learning a lot that will help him in life and love. Great characters, well paced. THank you.
Thank-you for a good story - I very much enjoyed it. I can't wait for the next part. :) Also, I echo what Shadracht said. :)
Fucking great story, love the interaction between the characters, you paint incredibly erotic sex scenes and have me envious of our hero's "plight". looking forward to the next chapter.
Great new story line can’t wait for the next installment. I have read all of your submissions and keep coming back for each new one.
This was good. But please give us more from the training, dancing, and gift giving. Make them longer and more detailed, I really like your characters but I don't want summaries of event. Please let us see the action as much as possible. Thanks 8.7/10
You missed a few of your aunt's cues, not queues. A queue is a line. As in, "I stood in the bloody queue for over an hour."