by lustyc50
The taboo attraction of aunt/nephew was brilliantly captured in a tender story of love. Such beautiful descriptions of bodies and acts made for a special memory.
PS-Penthouse and Penthouse Forum made my taboo instincts seem normal.
A few idiotic grammar mistakes in the fucking title set the stage for another horrible reading experience.
A prerequisite for communications is that one understand the rule of the language. You should write in a language you're fluent in. English isn't that language, regardless of it being the only language you're even vaguely familiar with.
When I read the description, I assumed it was gonna be a suck-ass story (not in a good way). But I forged onward. I did not disappoint myself. This was pretty bad indeed. I can tolerate a few spelling and/or grammatical issues, to a point. Seems like every other sentence was at issue. I exaggerate, but there were numerous issues. 1/4 star, if I could...did you skip middle school to try writing?
Really, I mean REALLY, indeed of Proof Reading and Editing.
Your lack of experience is, undoubtedly, a hindrance. By 25 I was at least twenty times ahead of you, which really suggests to me that you are actually closer to 16 ?