All Comments on 'Beach Interlude'

A nice fantasy. It would be nice to move to Planet Ashson where these things happen in a fairly routine manner. No harm, no foul, I suppose, and the ladies Karen and Susan will have the memory for the rest of their lives, to giggle together about during barbecues. Maybe they'll get inspired and end up swapping husbands, during some future drunken night of revelry? 5* ~~JB

The two friends were knowingly or unknowingly aching for a naughty interlude with Brad who had winsome physique, the nerve and an awesome ability to improvise glib rationalizations for the liberties he was taking. I enjoyed the story but could he encore this feat with 2 sisters or mother/daughter duo? Now that would be a challenge. Still this story of sun, sand and seduction was great diversion as the snow swirls outside.

Ergo the obvious score

Full marks *****

What's with the momentary drop into first person in the middle?

A bit "over the top" actually, one is allowed to dream but this meeting would have exceeded even the boldest sandy hook-up.