by lancelot49
Long story
I don’t often go for stories this long but reading some of the prequel stuff and the subject matter piqued my interest so gave it a go.
Whilst Ellie turned into the slut that you and her were hoping for at times it seemed a little far fetched that she would go off with another guy based on an erotic diary her mother had written decades earlier. That said I’m glad I stuck with it and enjoyed it hugely; I was glad it didn’t just turn into a fuck-fest gangbang with all and sundry shagging each of her holes repeatedly and her fully loving every second - that would stretching it (& her arse) just too far!!!
I loved this very hot story - but please check your work because there were quit a few careless mistakes with words destroyed.
Will look for more in coming days.
I like it. It wasn’t a favorite like the original. I felt it dragged a little to much for me.