All Comments on 'Becoming Daddy's Good Girl Ch. 05'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Binging #4 & 5 this evening, so I’ll reiterate a previous comment that my money’s on mom knowing exactly what’s going on, and has permission from daddy to join in; or perhaps incentives to recruit Alice to the family play time.

DunkirkDunkirkover 2 years ago

Daddy has 2 sex slaves.

JustplainjeffJustplainjeffover 2 years ago

I'm still not sure this series belongs in the Incest category, or should it be in the BDSM category? I definitely should have stopped after the first one, as I abhor any violence, even if it's consensual, which this wasn't, at first.

UAlbanyGirl518UAlbanyGirl518over 2 years ago

Wow! As I said before, BDSM is not my thing, but this chapter was compelling. 5 more stars for you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Fucking fab, more and more.

maughamy_issuesmaughamy_issuesover 1 year ago

"Thud. Thud. Thud.

He picked up the pass, flogging my ass." Got zero ideas about what this means.

"Unlike the flog, which made thudding impacts, this stringed. Badly." Badly stringed instruments annoy.

Flacking is promoting. Flaking is what old paint does.

Even so, Ch. 5 seems more tightly written than the first four, improvement clear.

Fireplace10Fireplace10about 1 year ago

I don't l like BDSM, and this sneaks on you. The story gets 5 stars but for the BDSM.

shadrachtshadracht8 months ago

REALLY did not care for him letting other men play with her. Ruined the special feeling between the two for me.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Horrible vile story

Anyone who could do such to a loved one or write about it is the lowest scum on the earth.

Shame on you

AnonymousAnonymous3 months ago

Wow, very naughty! Glad mom isn't getting left behind but is really in on it too.

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