by Leader12
All old guys need a Kayla. Great story. Thanks for sharing it with us. Cheers. Frankie
5. Good story, but I felt the ending went over a cliff. Just my feelings. Easy to continue this with part 2.
I could almost feel her breasts. That’s a 5 from me, even if the ending was a little abrupt. Thank you for writing this.
Hmmm... I agree with the others, the ending is abrupt and feels unfinished. You've left plenty of room to tack on another chapter or three, but have given no sign of that intention. It might be interesting to see how his friends react to his relationship with their daughter, who is 26 or 27 years his junior; is this a case of fuck-buddies for the weekend, or is there a relationship developing? Might be worth exploring? 4 stars, another chapter or two could bring it up.
This is a good story. However, it is more of two stories. The timeline is a little confusing. I know it could be continued but even so the story just stops.