All Comments on 'Brashey Family Story Ch. 01'

by BossySon21a

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MJOMJOover 15 years ago
Great start

Loved the way you built this one up.

Satyr040Satyr040over 15 years ago
Very Hot!!!

I do hope there will be a chapter 2 to this very hot, sexy story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Fantastic

Soooo HOT. Enough said,

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
WOW!!!!

I cant wait to read the 2nd chapter, one of the best mother-daughter story in the last years!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Excellent Story but...

Superb story got me really hot. My only problem was that you seemed to be building up the tension really well but when it came to the actual sex it happened so fast that it seemed really unlikely. There wasn't much description about how the women felt and there was no resistance or trepidation to the idea of committing an incestuous act.

None the less- I'm going straight on to part two

Hannah

Scarecrow51Scarecrow51almost 14 years ago
You need to watch you facts

Is Sarah 47 or 45. And you state that Leanna is 31, so that means that Sarah was 14 when Leanna was born. And Peoria is more than 500 miles from any large east coast city. The story over all is very good and I have enjoyed reading it so far.

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