All Comments on 'Check Mate'

Great job, this was well written, imaginative and very hot! I haven't played chess in more years than I care to admit, but I'm sure I've got that chessboard packed away somewhere, hmm.

Thoroughly enjoyed it! Especially enjoyed the international terms for some of the pieces!

Thanks guys. Let me know if you want to play online. It's possible as long as we don't play cappablanca, because buying back the queen would be a problem :-)

Literary translated from Dutch the rook is a tower, the knight is a horse, the bishop is a walker.

Great erotic tension….game on!

Well done! A nice short hot little tale.

Check Mate is a delightful fun story. I've never been very good at chess and lost most every game. With this chess variant I would have enjoyed losing or at least buying back my queen each game.

This story is well written, hot and enjoyable to read.

Thanks & all the best.

Good story...AL