All Comments on 'Courting Miss Greene Ch. 06'

I have read and enjoyed this story, except..... the using modern phrases such as "oh baby" and "baby", which to me was the most distracting. They just don't fit the time period, nor does the infusion of political correctness where Ginny must accompany the men in defense against the villians. It is distracting when the dialog is out of charcter of the time period. Perhaps a bit of research into the time period would help you in future stories.

Other than that it is a wonderful story line. Keep Writing!

This is yet another unfinished story.

There are many loose ends (sic) surely there must be a final part to tie them up !!

A wonderful story, enjoyed every word.