All Comments on 'Daddy's Little Torture'

by Threepio10

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AnonymousAnonymous2 months ago

Dialog only really does nothing for me.

I do hope others enjoy your submission

Threepio10Threepio102 months agoAuthor

@Anonymous thanks for your comment anyway. This was a little experiment, and not my usual "style". Something a little more subtle for a change. Indeed, I hope others do like it. To each his own!

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Male, Dutch, 1981 I'm a starting writer of romantic/erotic/pornographic short stories. My aim is to write credible, sensitive and captivating stories. Sex positive, sex work = work. I consider myself a positive nihilist and ethical hedonist. If nothing else matters, let's ma...