All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 02'

Well. Can't say it was much of a chapter but I am certainly invested in the story!

This story is so hot becomes obscene. I hope you continue. You must be a real hot woman to write as you do.

Shortest chapter of yours I've ever read?

frankly compared to some of your other pieces... this is absolute garbage. short, tasteless, and pointless. it doesn't further the plot it explains nothing, and would have been better as a paragraph in a full chapter submission.

I hope you are ok, this submission of yours is not uo to the same standards as everything else. No real story, just a sex scene, not like you.

Amazing. To me this reads like a LightNovel / GameLit story, without the self-cencorship.

I do hope you keep writing on this, it’s .. different .. than the average Literotica story.

Half a page chapter. REALLY…….