All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 10'

I love your stories they are just to short :)

You keep me wanting more! I wish each chapter was longer, but o understand.

Keep expecting more from this story, shouldn't really.

Why do some of the "Read more of this series" boxes not contain the next chapter. It seems like every odd number fails to link

Really need to stop saying "Lana Fulmine" every time its getting very annoying!

The Lana Fulmine every reference to her is poor writing. Number one fan constantly appearing is off-putting as well. This has the potential to be a really interesting story but a fraction of a scene and a single page at that is very disappointing. I hope it improves but I'm not sure how many more pages I can deal with.

The difference between eastern and western fantay stories: the eastern one practice and kick ass. The western ones just dick around.

MC deserved this. And just like anything penname3000 writes about, the MC will never grow from this mistake.

These short chapters are becoming a pain in the ass.