All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 12'

Amazing! Thanks for adding the sister. Can't wait to see what challenges he faces next and who he adds to his harem. Will it be a teacher? A crush from school/neighborhood? A family member? (My vote: Family member (mom, aunt, niece, cousin, grandma) keep up the great work. Oh, water rune or light should be next.

Would love to have a little story...in the story...

good story but you needed some variation in your description the frequency that you used "nursing on him with such hunger" was a distracting.

Sucking and twitching, got it.

Hottest chapter yet. Incredible!

it's like you get into good prose and then think, how can I ruin this chapter with a repetitive cringe-worthy extended sex scene. Good ideas, awful sex writing

Love how you gave Garnet her own voice and vocab - this was the best chapter yet.