All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 01 Ch. 13'

Too much sex not enough plot

Seriously... I know this is a sex site, but you're also writing (or suppose to be writing) a story, and you NEED A LOT MORE PLOT. The vast majority of this 'chapter' could have been summed up with one or two paragraphs of saying he fucked the hounds.

And another whole chapter of smut. Like the last one didn't have enough of it, after ONE SINGLE PLOT PROGRESS: summoning a Glyph champion.

Who needs plot

When the sex is this hot?

I'm angry that I'm mouse wheeling down until it gets back to plot, you make me ignore sex on a sex site, that is rude sir!

Same as anon.. Scroll through to look for the story since it's all the same. It's why I stopped reading the maid story.

yawn

Love the puppy girl thing but that’s a fetish of mine lol oh you get into leashes and you like to kill me.

I hope he chooses Maya his best friend and his big sister Crystal next..