All Comments on 'Dungeon Builder's Harem Book 04 Ch. 13'

I love the world building. The sex is getting gratuitous at this point? Don't stop with that, obviously it's literotica, but let it happen in the story, not just him stopping every 2 days to screw. The training screw and the street blow were good examples of story building sex.

Man ! You have a great imagination !

Imagination based on some actual facts. Meskalamdug was indeed a king of Ur, and Puabi did live there (and was quite prominent). Whether or not she was a queen and who she was related to in what way is a matter of debate. There isn't quite enough documentation left over to be certain.

So what mypenname3000 is doing with those historical people is, if not really supported by known history, definitely not contradicted by it either.

And, it may be, that the author is using the sex to promote the idea of "make love, not war". Which would be a bit more subtle than the sex scenes seem to suggest, I admit. Of course, the lack of subtlety could be a very subtle trick in itself.