by mypenname3000
This was a really good series I could not stop reading it until I got to the last part very detailed and I enjoyed it. However, the only thing that I thought was a bit much was the incest and could have been toned down. Other than that I would like to read more and would love to see some futa on male acton or vice versa. Overall this was a good series and I look forward to more.
Really enjoyed this series so far. Constructive feedback wise I'd just point out you have a tendency to overuse "suckling" and winking.
I look forward to more!