All Comments on 'Goth Girl'

*****Very entertaining good sex read. I love the open ending making way for a possible part 02? Thanks for sharing.

Hot humping fun! Every old dude’s dream.

Very nice,is it a one off or will we see more of this odd couple?

"her body tensed up into a ridged state." Uh, weird. Unless you meant rigid. :-)

Good story. Could have used some help in spots with the typos, buy I enjoyed it.

Too bad he's had a vasectomy, she sounds mature and like she would be a great mother. :) :)

(Not)!

Brilliant, loved it. Would like it even more if you wrote more about them. They both sound dirty as fuck in their own ways. This story definitely has legs, please continue.

Really a very entertaining story. The " back and forth" was pretty funny and punched up the dialog. I enjoyed the ending...and since I'm from Cleveland, I want to see how she adjusts! Lol!

Love the dry whit. Just the right banter tween old and whippersnapper.

I would love to read more about these two as they are quite enjoyable.

Loved it! Nothing like a Goth Damsel in distress to bring life back to a divorced middle aged Dad. Hope there's part two, maybe a Indians vs Braves baseball game. Then of course the trip to Mexico. I bet she matures under Bob's wing, and He gets his best sex ever. Five stars.

Would love to see a Georgia via NYC goth deal with Ohio. 5 stars today; Chapter 02 please.

I'm ready for part two, three, and more. Should you need a proofreader just ask and I will help eliminate the distractions from the further adventures of Goth Girl. This is definitely a story with two of my favorite characters.

Best story I've read in weeks and weeks. Keep up the good work!

Great characters and pace.

Applying lots of sunscreen in Mexico will be required for that pale, pale skin.

Hoping for future installments.

Really enjoyed this. Great writing. Great characters.

Well Heck! I was so anxious to read part two! More of Goth Girl please.

I like be your work. Simple as. O to be as eloquent. Thank you, again.

Superb storytelling! On level 7 out of 5 stars

I loved this little story

Frankenstien, your ability to write about interesting fantasies being lived by tru!y likable, interesting, and human characters is outstanding!! I'm going to hit your library all weekend!!! Thank you!!

Lovely story.....really enjoyed it and believed every word

Creative plot, well written and erotic without the sex scene swamping the story. It deserves 5 stars, but it didn’t quite inflame my libido enough to require an ice cold shower. Thanks for sharing.

Doesn't make me think I want a Goth girl, but he didn't think he did either. 5.

Just wish it was longer.

Would love a follow up on this one. Good stuff. I go for stories more than sex, but i feel like you left a ton to work with. Thank you.

That was a fun one!

Put a big smile on my face reading this, nice set up, good descriptions of characters and sex

This passes the "wanting to know the before and after" test, dude, which is rare, and you need to expand these characters, their back story, and this relationship.

Hot, steamy and to the point... Moreover, I really like that way you write dialog...

So, I'm just going to go with everyone else here asking for seconds!

Great writing but ended to early so I only gave it a 5*.

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Fun Stuph!

11/10!!!!!

why the Vasectomy , He should be able to breed this tiny bitch!

short and sweet, good story. sort of hope for an accidental meeting with his Ex and kids and another with her parents.