All Comments on 'Guardian Devil'

For a one shot

If the emotional range is a way of drawing power for oneself, she would have an advantage. Like any human she is intrinsically capable of grand depths of darkness, just because. But having access to a well of light, especially with her circumstances is impressive and potentially quite useful.

Its better as pie, imo. Only so much you can do with certain people, and certain people need and should have different consequences.

Great story. The confrontation with Satan felt a bit off though, as if you were trying to go too fast, too soon. All in all, a good story.

You write about the family like you know them. They are real to you. An excellent story.

Good story but the last part happened too fast.

The title itself reminds me of say when someone does something they knew they shouldn't have done, but it happens anyways and then their entire life is changed after that very moment. Sometimes people do things without necessarily thinking about it and end up with nothing but regret later so it's important to listen to the opposing side..... I just started reading this and I have to say I am hooked.

-K-

Finally finished it and I felt that I had to because I was literally glued to the story the whole time. You're such a great author and very descriptive in your words. Keep doing what you do so well and I look forward to reading more from you.

-K-

very humorous

your stories is that with your writing skills you make the flow from reality to your imaginative places so freely that I'm still there hurrying to get to the next chapter to see what comes next. Somehow during that process you get me so familiar with the characters that they seem real to me and I'm into what happens to them. I have read some interesting writings here as well as other places and you are undoubtedly one of my favorite authors. I appreciate whatever it is that you have going on inside your head that comes up with the stories as well as how you write them. Thanks kid! I look forward to your future efforts ... Scotty

When I read this title...I hesitated about reading the story, but I did and loved it! So glad to have read such a "sinfully" delightful story. I truly loved all the main characters and really loved the ending.

was a great read, it kept my interest, it was the first story I have read like this and I was very impressed with the way you wrote it. once I started reading I didn't stop until I got to the end, good job and well done

Another awesome story. Keep writing!

A bloody good story, well-told and 'different'.

Thank You

HP

A nice story. Different but good

This is by far the best story i ever read! The humour too lol

I liked it. Thank you for sharing. 5* Slainté

5 stars, just plain beautiful. And funny.

Great twist on the theme! Wonder if sis and bro gonna be as happy as everyone else

I liked it but ehhhhh. 5/5 though

Really very good. Great to read something different

Most of the story was very good. The only part that sucked and threw me out as being hard to believe was that Mason would ever have been attracted to that barbie cheerleader (Kristen or whatever). People like him don't just moon over pretty toys - THEY know that beneath lucky genetics are despicable personalities.