All Comments on 'Homecoming'

Good story. I hope you do a follow up to it.

Boyd

Please tell us that more is on the way. I loved it.

I hope there is more!!!!!

Fingers poised. Eagerly awaiting your next chapter.

Not your average interacial story,for a first time author,

outstanding.I hope this is not a one time story,as i will

look for your name in the future.I look at the authors

name before clicking on the story,more so in the interacial

section.

The title of my comment says it all. This is a very well done work and you seriously need to follow-up with more. The historical accuracy was a strong point. I've been Ste. Mere-Eglise and environs several times as my late father was in the D-Day invasion.

My wife and I also have one plea for not just you, but also other writers of interracial erotica: Please remember that real interracial sexual relationships of the BM/WF variety are nothing new. My wife had her first IR intercourse in September 1978 when she was an 18-year-old college freshman. And, she continues to "see" Al several times a year, their relationship having lasted almost thirty years so far. To put more historical prespective on this, Angie's older sister experimented with IR sex starting in her college days back in the early 1970's, and lasting into the early 1990's when she married. So, let's also put a more recent historical perspective on BM/WF sex, OK? It didn't begin with the Internet!

Awesome beginning, and I am anxious to read more from you. Your atention to detail and characterization is stunning - an amazing first story!

Now, where's the rest?

wow your prose is beautiful and I am looking forward to part two...Jayha

Yipes! I just read somewhere that you should probably post something to those who voted and were kind enough to leave posts. I've been wanting to do that but that also means that I would have to vote and I don't like the idea of giving myself a high score. In any event, thanks all of you for reading my first submission. And for the voter who requested some additional story regarding BM/WW romance...like the sauce commercial says, "don't worry...its in there."

In places your narration has tones of wonderful Harper Lee about it. You bring readers into a historical and cultural landscape of bygone and legacies. I was immediately drawn to the fate of the wondered soldier. Very refreshing and unique story unfolding here. Can't wait to read how it unfolds. This is what I consider the hight of very good erotic fictions taken the time to develop dialogue, narration, pace and plot around which to wrap sensual and erotic scenes and tensions.

I'm very excited to read the rest of your story, I truly have enjoyed the little bit I have read. Thanks!

COME BACK AND FINISH!!!!!

Excellent writing, very well constructed and the use of language is very engaging.