All Comments on 'Honor Thy Mother & Thy Father Ch. 03'

Editor's oversight - ex Prolonged_Debut10: Honor thy Mother and thy Father.

"complimentary" and not "complementary" (expressing praise)

"taut" and not "taught" (pulled tight)

Keep writing with these mistakes in mind.

You had Jemma going through a metal detector with a pair of Ben Wa Balls inserted, that would not happen, the metal detectors would have detected them. :) Metal detectors would pick up something smaller than they are, LOL's...

She is going to start charging you if you keep putting out private life out there for all to read! LMAO

Yeah, I know the story is old. Heck, this is the fourth time I've decided to read them ALL. Working my way through. But it struck me: Ben Wah balls are metallic. She'd have set off any metal detector. It's not the MASS of metal, it's the SIZE. those are pretty large. If they can detect a polymer framed handgun, no problem seeing those.