by TrampsAnThieves
Very good and erotic
The jump to home renovation was a bit of a shock, things are really more complicated than that. A little more romance would have been nice as well. Other than that, really good, I liked it.
I can't give you a 4.5 or 4.6, so....
Good story! But the sister’s name changed from Jessi to Julie? That’s a fairly significant oversight and a little jarring for the reader.