by ElectricBlue
*warm smile*
Very lovely.... truly enjoyed the way you told of his first encounter with this exotically erotic woman. Will look forward to reading the next chapter. Keep up the wonderful writing.
Really good writing and story telling. Some distracting typos to fix: Paragraph 5, jewelry is spelled wrong. Para 9, a "byre" is a cowshed. I'm sure you mean "fire". Para 18, "starling" should be "startling".