by mypenname3000
to much "daddy" girl talk was of a 12 year old not 18. did not like this chapter at all. Pappasleaze!
I've read this series on another website and while I really enjoy it my only critique is why did you keep adding the modifier "barely legal" so often? It really gets annoying, you could've just said it once at the beginning just to establish the fact. Either way I'm trudging through it again because I enjoy the series and I want to see where it leads (plus I really want a halo).