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AnonymousAnonymous12 months ago

As ALL stories I've started reading from this "author" (authors?), I DID NOT FINISH... IT'S THAT POORLY WRITTEN.

---Choppy, short sentences during sex scenes,

---common grammar errors of non-native English speakers/writers,

---childish, shallow scripting.

OVERRATED,.. REAL RATING NEEDS TO BE AROUND 3.9... just being honest.

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...