All Comments on 'Institute of Apotheosis Research Ch. 58'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Jesus, will they murder those psychers already? Will there be at least one successful assassination attempt? At first these mind-control stories were hot. Now they're boring and getting utterly dark and frankly dystopian, apocalyptic. I route for normal people now. Please add some positivity to the plot, kill some psychers already!

mharrisonmharrisonabout 2 years ago

Got to say that the extremely long winded sex scenes no longer hold any attention any more. Just repetitive. That only leaves a very small amount of actual plot. OK so this is an erotic story site but these huge long scenes just don't hold the attention... :(

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Erotic author been writing since 2013. I've had two stories blocked by literotica for being written by AI, Bimbo App Santa's Naughty Gift 3 & Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 14. That one was rejected 4 times despite my protests. Talked to site admin and she just sent me a lin...