by DinaDevereux
I really want to see more with Cyrus. Does she become pregnant? Do they contact each other again? Does she see any of them after that? I'm left with questions!! I'd love to see at least one more chapter! That was great!
~Starlights
I feel like you could write another part, I love how you made it turn out all cute and special with Chris suddenly having a soft spot for Bunny. I want to see their relationship and what happens after. Please think about writing a second part to this story.
I'm not sure that every girl would agree so quickly, but it was an interesting read. Not "Non-Consent" but more like "erotic Coupling" Keep the stories cuming, and clean up your words.
Well done! Improve it by making Cyprus' wife walking in on them, the morning after. Cyprus gets kicked out and lives with the now pregnant Bunny. Just a thought.Loved it!
Please please please make anither one to go with this I want to see what bunny chooses.
We all have slightly different tastes and there are things I personally would have liked better now that I'm a little more hard core. But, I'm not gonna tell you what to write. Just gonna beg you to do more of it! You stayed right on track and kept the action going smoothly. Don't be afraid to spend a little more time in deeper descriptions of the action, and don't be afraid of share creampies...
Love your work!
I'm in the louisville area so this is super hot and close to home! Makes a girl want to go to Fourth Street next month...hehe
At first I thought this was gonna be another 4-some story but I'm glad it wasnt. Can't wait to read more if your planning on more chapters after this one.