All Comments on 'Laura and I Finally Together Pt. 03'

Such a romantic tale - thank you

@AnnaValley11 thanks for your kind comment!

If you love these characters, you might be interested to hear that I'm working on kind of an overhaul, or an expansion, of the story if you will. The idea is reaching (short) novel like proportions, and I'm already well underway with writing some of the chapters. I'm delving much deeper into their past, I'm involving their parents and upbringing in the story, as well as where the came from (birth mothers). Let me know if you're interested and I'll keep you updated, because the erotic element (if any) will be very minor; I'll just keep that as it is right now in the trilogy I published here; so I'm not sure Literotica is the right channel for what I'm working on now.

The dialogue between the two characters is so real. I’ve read hundred of stories on Literotica and can say this one is in the top 5 as to realism. Simply a fantastic series and I cannot wait for more.

One negative- please remove the “pornographic” comment in Chapter 2. There was zero pornographic about this wonderful story.

@weathernut54

Thanks for your comment. I take it as a big compliment; realism in dialogues is one of my main goals in general, but even more so in this trilogy.

I kinda see what you mean about my use of the word 'pornographic'. I didn't mean it derogatory or to pigeonhole my own creation; for me pornographic isn't a dirty word. But I kinda see what you mean. Anyway, I don't think Literotica lets me edit works after they are published? So I couldn't remove/change it even if I wanted to.

Also, if you're interested, see my comment above in reply to AnnaValley11. More work in this 'franchise' is coming up later!