All Comments on 'Liar: His Story'

it's nice to see you writing again. I've missied seeing your stories and hopefully this means you're back!

The "writer" needs to take a few years of writing classes before attempting another "story."

Hey! You should follow up and tells us about his trip with all those ripe girls!

I'm glad you're back!

...because it was so tongue-in-cheek. No pun. Ignore the punks who are critical without any coaching. That last anonymous asshole probably can hardly read much less write.

"years of writing classes" and learn what? That a person becomes a writer by writing? literotica shouldn't accept "drive-by" ratings that wreck your score without contributing to the process. (I can just imagine what that constipated moron would do with a pen and pad!)

This responds to comments of "terrible:" your comments prove you haven't any idea what good writing is. This is not, to be sure, Christie's best, but many if not most of her stories are brilliantly written. And considering her audience on this site she's made them highly erotic as well.

But her talent and ability as a storyteller and writer -- professional calibre -- are indisputable. At her best and in other genres she could make a good living writing. I'd like to see her write a screenplay; bet she'd be great at it.

Christie is one of the best writers on Literotica. Great to see her back.

Christie - you've done it again! The hot, steamy blend of lust and reluctance, and again with the impregnation thread that's so incredibly HOT. You keep on writing them, we'll keep on reading!!

Write all of these stories that you can write. I love them! I'd love to meet you and give you my no-sperm-count circumcised cock a few times.

Christie, you really need to lay back and let a man fill you with a baby and get this over with.

You really need to write about the trip with the daughter and her friends. You've already opened that door. Go for it. Don't listen to any negative comments.

Christie,

Glad you're back, too.

the two 2007 stories are far from your best efforts, but I'm still convinced, as I once told you, you're either a succesful professional writer or will be when you want to be. Pay not the slightest attention to the idiot, above, who judges your abilities negatively.

Would love to see a follow-up. Great story! :D

Just want you to know, I've read most of your stories, and they are all so HOT! It amazes me that you can write such awesome stuff. Are you a pro?

What story was that? I did a keyword search and came up with no Literotica story with that title.

Look forward to the sequel! Let's see Dad knock up all his daughter's friends!

I hope this one is next in line for developing the storyline! That last line in the story is the best cliffhanger in an erotic story ever. We've got our backpacks ready to join you on a hike with lots of ripe young girls!

With a whole month........Some judge will be ordering him to not have any more children like the one in Florida did with that woman who had more than the old woman who lived in a shoe.

For anyone wondering, this is based off a story from My First Time . com, titled "Liar". Google "Liar hotel site:myfirsttime.com", and you'll find it. :)

Christie wrote stories as "Patrick Flanagan" and the original Liar story is one of those.