All Comments on 'Love (with Sister) in an Elevator'
by Scott_Free
- 14 Comments
Rpgmrnewsalmost 5 years agoThat would be a good title for a song!!!!!! Please continue the story.
Omart57almost 5 years agoFantastic, terrific ................ Add more positive descriptive words here............... Great story , . Loved it!!!
Literotfan83almost 5 years agoI liked it as a quick thrill story but I would love to see the characters and story expand to show loads more as they sound hot and interesting. Great start :)
Orthopodealmost 5 years agoGlad to see you are back on top form, great short story, well worth a sequel. Any chance of rewriting the last chapter of 3 is a magic number?
TabooTales1almost 5 years agoIt's a little rushed, but it still works as a short story with a bit more build-up than your average stroke story. Brittni is a wonderful character. Lucas could have been fleshed out more. I know he's just a "little" claustrophobic, but it seems that part of the story is quickly ignored for plot reasons. But those complaints do not take away from your great story. Thank you for writing.
Anonymousalmost 5 years agowould be awesome to see a continuation of this story, maybe a chapter two?
Anonymousalmost 5 years ago'you can add in back story in a later episode if you decide to continue. It was a fun quick read.
goducks111almost 5 years agoa well-written clever story. what made the tale better than most is you created some decent tease with great sex and romance in just 2 pages. wow.
JJMemaw0623about 4 years agoYeah, that was just plain hot! Great job by the way. 5 *'s all around. Please keep writing, and I'll keep reading!!
Anonymousabout 4 years agoIf you don't write a sequel to this story, I will hold my breath till you do. And I'll sulk like a Sissy. This was friggen awesome, more on these wonderful characters is severely needed and we deserve it. You know you only have yourself to blame for writing such a great short story....
bshell47about 4 years agoSo many have dreamed about being locked in an elevator with a sexy woman.
Loved the Truth or Dare combined with the broken elevator.
Hope you have another chapter planned.
ScottishTexanover 1 year agoThe best part of this story was that the little sister had been trying to seduce her brother for a long time without any success, but she succeeded in the end. The rest of the story was just kind of so-so. I didn't care for the elevator setting considering the path of the plot. It would have been a great setting had Lucas been teetering on the edge of losing his demeanor and seducing him was the only way that Britt could distract him to calm him down. 4/5
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