All Comments on 'The Mantis (Pt. 01)'

Mechanically Augmented NeuroTransmitter Interception System - from the old TV show.

Book?

Kant, I think this is some of the best work you have done...even though it is just the very beginning of a longer story. I hate to think it'll take years for you to finish it at the pace you've set for yourself. The third person narration works really well, IMO. You must be the "Queen of the Hook", the way you always leave us groaning and saying, "No, don't stop it there!"

Just like all the characters in the story, I'm not quite sure what's going on or why. And I never saw the twists coming. I can really relate to their feelings of instability. I'll be interested to see where this goes and if it all has a cohesive conclusion.

This could be quite an 'edge of your seat, nail-biter', Kant. Nice start. I'm liking it already.