All Comments on 'Mommy's Incubus Son Comes of Age 05'

Too repetitive. Also some very BAD mistakes. Damien sucked Mrs. Greene's clit not her dick. There are a couple of mistakes in each of your chapters. Fix these and you get 5 stars.

Are you just writing using a bot now??? You repeat the same sentences every other line. It's just a bunch of porn talk word salad...

A little too short this time

I agree with anonymous. Your recent stories read like they are written by an A.I. I have seriously thought that with your last 5-6 stories ive read. also during a couple of your more recent anal scenes you have repeatedly mixed-up being in their ass and their cunt or twat. Not the character switching back and forth just miss labeling the anatomy. 3 stars because of the extremely repetitive and drawn out sex scenes. Sometimes less is more.

Still love the stories. You need someone to edit, though. Cunt, asshole. You keep switching back and forth.

Needs more plot and an editor to correct your errors. Sex getting a little repetitive otherwise a good story.

Great series, but Damian is fucking so many pussies it's getting hard to keep track of them. I don't think the author knows the definition of "Taint."