All Comments on 'Not at All Sure About This'

Perhaps a DS relationship or writer has lost her way.

Not Loving wives Pretty perverted actually This is erotic? Don't think so

never write another story again

never take another drink again

I guess there is a moral in there somewhere! Maybe two!!!

I've read a lot of your earlier stuff in the past. Sabine at School and the like. I thought those were excellent stroke-stories. I dig the reluctant, submissive young woman scenarios, the 'forced' exhibitionism, etc. These recent LW stories seem a little lacking. They have similar themes, but with an older, married protagonist. That might be part of what brings it down for me: I like the idea of a young woman discovering sex and her slutty side, but it doesn't compute for me when it is a 40 year old married woman. Additionally, part of what made your earlier stories work was the incremental progression of the risky behavior; that is absent in these tales where the stories seem to be crammed with as much deviant behavior into as few pages as possible. Either this story or one of your other recent LW submissions has the woman acknowledging that being nude and exposed in front of friends, neighbors, acquaintences, co-workers, and strangers just didn't make her that uncomfortable anymore. I can relate, except the feeling that has faded for me is excitement, to be replaced by....

I'm not sure exactly, but it reminds me of the feeling I had when I was a little kid and ate too much of my Halloween candy in one sitting, if you know what I mean.

As soon as you drop a story like this in LW, you are going to get stayed and 1-bombed by those who seek out and destroy these types of stories/authors. You must have known this, and so I commend your bravery. Although I haven't really liked these recent submissions, I am glad to see you are still churning them out.

Shows how juvenile exhib and voy is.

Women tend to get more out of the exhibition fantasy while cucks seem to get more out of the cuckold fantasy. To each their own I say, but this story would likely get more useful feedback in a different category.

For starters, folks who read erotic stories are supposed to be a tad more broadminded than the average person, yet the first thing these so-called broadminded suckers do is complain about the story sitting in the wrong section and as a consequence give the story a low rating.

Who cares.

Better rate a tale on its merits, not based on where it's sitting.

This one is alright, as in above average. I've seen "better" from Sabine, but also seen a lot worse from a whole bunch of other writers.

I'm glad Sabine is still sharpening her pencils once in a while, for she's among the better authors of erotic fiction out there, regardless in what section her stories appear...

Cheers Sabine.

JJ

Love your stories, but I'm a bit confused now. What's the chronology of the Beth stories? Here's what I've tried to piece together, but it's almost like there are two separate Mrs. Johnsons. Is Sunday and after some sort of post-story epilogue or even pre-story? I just can't make it fit in.

Golf Tournament

Golf Championship

Shoplifting Incident

Cottage at the Lake

Big Mistake

Why Did I Ever Tell Marilyn?

Well & Truly Caught

My God, What Have I Done?

Oh Yes, It Can Get Worse

Well, I Thought It Had Gotten Worse

At The Cabin

Sorority

After Getting Home

Monday Morning and at Work

I Talked with Rob

Not at All Sure About This

Sunday and the Future

Another story, Well done. Thank you.

Do you really not understand the difference? Awful.

Some silly shit.

Pathetic