by coaster2
Strikes a bell with me. I married my wife less than a year after meeting her. We celebrated our 44th this year. Hope that Astrid and Rick celebrate their 50th...
A beautiful love story.
Well developed and suitably concluded.
Very satisfying, all round.
(But Prague isn't on the Danube!)
I loved this story so much! This has been the first story I've read on this site that wasn't 100% kinky sex lol And it was a good choice, I think. The only complaint I would have is that the story was a bit bland/ white bread. I kept expecting Astrid to reveal her inner dominatrix or even Rick to have some hidden devient sexual side. Oh well, though. The story was still a wonderful a romance :)
A comfortable, easy read that hooked me early. Very well written with like-able characters. Now I'll have to check out some more of your stories. Thanks for sharing!
I have recently found your writing, and what a joy it has been..To read stories that are happy and involve "real" people is so refreshing. Look forward to reading more.
I have to admit that your stories are an absolute joy to read. I can't wait to finish reading all the others you have to offer, and anything new that may come.
Thanks so much for a great read. I hope that you give us lots more of the same.
please keep on writing ,i love this one.Hope to read more from you in the future.
Over all this is a STRONG 4+. The varied events and happenings through out the entire novel kept the suspense at a high level ending with a lot of hope for sequel or spin offs. TK U MLJ LV NV
really have enjoyed the quality of your stories all woul
d receive a 5 star rating in my estimation
In summary overall all a very good story. My only real negative is there was just too much of the yarn devoted to sex.
The poor boy theme is so well traveled I expected a rehash of standard (tired) plot moves - none of which were done. You avoided wealth solving problems, rich girl ruling the roost over submissive man,
You tell a story well, Coaster. The characters are way beyond plot devices, making the understated sex scenes more rich than the blow by blow approaches.
'Loved Yakima also.
would have been nice to know about the 1st child. once again coaster2 leaves the reader hanging !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The only problem I have with coaster's stories is that they end WAY too soon.
Wow, what a great dynamic love story. The story seems to reach out and firmly grab your heart. The intensity of the love story of how she chose him and then how the story progressed through the binding of their love, then the drama of the kidnapping, then the final chapter of their love story where they attained that higher plain of love that would last through eternity. I wished only the story would have continued as it seems that this love story could go on forever and never end telling of their future, children and family. This story would make a wonderful movie. Well done Coaster2, this was a 10 star story if I have ever read one.
I agree with tinfoilhat this 1 needs another chapter . nothing new with COASTER leave a story hanging !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!