by damppanties
You wrote a beautiful story. The sadness of being too scared to love was touching and had me almost crying.
You did a great job.
This was such a touching story. I really enjoyed it. The wife's pain and the husband's pain mingled quite well. So sweet & so appropriate for Valentine's day.
Allthe best,
Honey
Beautiful & hopeful. I was scared to death she would reject him. Loved it!
Forget about the movie "Love Story." Brian's and Andrea's sweet story is the one they should have made. This wonderful writer shows her tender side with the two character trying to regain their happiness lost. Very moving and so well written.
From the story:
"Andrea, I don't want you to feel that I'm pressurising you into anything."
What she has is major depression. She needs help