by Many Feathers
I could feel the brush strokes upon my skin..and my own wetness begin........erotic,senual,and oh so loving
I feel like I have a good idea about this one sweetheart. I could feel it all. You know I adore your work. You are my friend, and my healer. I hope I can some day repay all you have done for me. Smooches....
Pea
Excellent language, a well set scene and what a lovely piece of seduction.
Well done.
My what you do to an alphabet. I greatly enjoyed your work and am panting on the edge of my seat awaiting the next letter.
a most lovely tale, romantic, erotic, with a wonderful ending... i sorta missed "O", but PP is a sweet piece of work... like Bear.. amd waiting for Q...
Not much to say that hasn't. Imagination - flow - emotion - sensual - erotic - arousing - entertainingly enjoyable - all this without a bruise - no one better here compared to this effort.
Perhaps - Quaintly Quivering next?
Thanks Author - with High Regard
You have a wonderful way with words, and keeping me intrested in the story.
I like the fact that even though the couple did end up making love, and falling in love the entire story wasn't about the physical sex act, but rather the emotional and intellectual sensuality. GREAT JOB!